Tuesday, August 2, 2011

Can you help "spice up" this paragraph?

Ulrich von Gradwitz's constant battle over ownership of the precipitous woodland with Georg Znaeym seems as though it will never come to an end.But the two men son find out their is another element to battle, nature. As Ulrich guards his land he finds that nature itself can control the outcome of many different situations. Nature upsets the outcome of everything as an approaching storm's fury leaves the feuding enemies stretching out on the ground with a tree trapping them both.Now the two must extinguish their battle and work together to save not only themselves but their land. This misfortune not only stops the enemies from fighting and prevents conflict, but it also leads to the offering of wine, and putting aside their differences to make peace. [Will insert another example sentence here] This prolonged feuding proves certain conflicts can last for extended periods of time, but the final outcome is never easy to predict.

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